Is this a Good Story Plot?

well, you certainly have this all planned. that's good and bad. It's good because you have a direction to move in.It's bad because you need to have some wiggle room if you want to change how something happens or if you get a new idea and want to add it. I have been through that. Last year I tried writing a novel I planned it all out and then I got new ideas and wanted to change things. In the end it came out a disaster. your idea is very good and interesting. I would actually love to read this, but you got to leave yourself some wiggle room in the process.